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It’s all over!!

Heylo Friends,

I just tried hands on Poetry.  It is about a boy and a girl and their relationship.
A Broken Boy’s Heart kinda poem ..

Hope you will like it…

 

Little did he know,
He might fall,
Loving her was not his goal,
but life without her is now
like an empty pool.
He knows it’s over
his love… forever.

Little did she know
he was there near,
The love that blossomed
was not a night stand,
now he is confused where the
relationship stands …

He gave his heart ..
not to break .. But she did
She was not a passing cloud
but now it’s clear very loud.
A new beginning
With the message
It is all over!!

 

PS: ‘He’ is not me :P

Thanks for reading …
*Comments and Rating is welcome*

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Categories: Poetry
  1. Neha Mishra
    January 18, 2011 at 12:03 AM

    dis one is really gud !! keep it up buddy !!

    • January 18, 2011 at 11:11 AM

      Thank you Neha ..

  2. Arvind
    January 13, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    Excellent one .. I like it.. Nice pick & choose of words ..

    • January 13, 2011 at 12:43 PM

      Thank you Arvind :)

  3. Ramanathan
    December 11, 2010 at 12:35 PM

    Did u watch TR films b4 writing this….sama rhyming’a irukku…..

    • December 11, 2010 at 5:33 PM

      Hahaha … No never !!!
      The rhyming all came in a good timing ;)

  4. sripriya
    December 10, 2010 at 10:43 AM

    hey its reli nice :)

  5. darpan
    December 9, 2010 at 2:13 PM

    Good one yaar….

    Hope u write one more…… title being “Here she comes again” or “Here comes another angel for me” and give a happy ending.

    It feels sad wit sad ending. N specially i can feel the pain too… :)

    • December 9, 2010 at 2:56 PM

      Aww … Hope I get to write .. atleast for you :) :)
      I have never wrote anything with sad endings…. this is the first one … :)

  6. Sharadha
    December 9, 2010 at 12:09 PM

    hey simply superb..
    She was not a passing cloud
    but now it’s clear very loud..
    i loved these lines whr u hv expressed te depth of ur feelings 4 her..

    P.S. i really dint mean tat u is “U” :P

    • December 9, 2010 at 12:20 PM

      Thank you Sharadha :)
      Your PS is making me Laugh :P hahahaha

      • Sharadha
        December 9, 2010 at 2:14 PM

        hahaha..i’m happy 4 tat…yay atlast i can make u 2 smile atleast 4 a few seconds!ACHIEVEMENT :P

      • December 9, 2010 at 2:57 PM

        hmm .. you did :) :) *Cheers*

  7. AkulaSriAditya
    December 9, 2010 at 1:28 AM

    Itz not over dude… it will be a beginning, if any girl read this….! ur simply amazing:) #Love it, Like it# May god bless you with all you wanted:)

    • December 9, 2010 at 11:13 AM

      End comes with a new beginning … that is all I wanted to write ….
      Thank you Akula :)

  8. Evo
    December 8, 2010 at 11:57 PM

    Dubuku. Enna feeling?

    • December 9, 2010 at 11:11 AM

      No feelings.. just a poem i wanted to write :) :)

  9. December 8, 2010 at 9:30 PM

    Realy awesome,,,, i dont know abt ur profession, bt m sure,,,, dat u r a writter,,,, only a writter hv such kind of words (meaning full), f u r not a writter let me tell u something abt ur future,,, join it,,, u vl make ur place very well

    • December 8, 2010 at 9:42 PM

      Awww thanks for those words :) :)

      Thank you so much … Let me see for that future . I ll try !!!

  10. December 8, 2010 at 5:15 PM

    Aww. Good one! Specially tht Night stand;)

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