It’s all over!!
Heylo Friends,
I just tried hands on Poetry. It is about a boy and a girl and their relationship.
A Broken Boy’s Heart kinda poem ..
Hope you will like it…
Little did he know,
He might fall,
Loving her was not his goal,
but life without her is now
like an empty pool.
He knows it’s over
his love… forever.
Little did she know
he was there near,
The love that blossomed
was not a night stand,
now he is confused where the
relationship stands …
He gave his heart ..
not to break .. But she did
She was not a passing cloud
but now it’s clear very loud.
A new beginning
With the message
It is all over!!
PS: ‘He’ is not me :P
Thanks for reading …
*Comments and Rating is welcome*
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dis one is really gud !! keep it up buddy !!
Thank you Neha ..
Excellent one .. I like it.. Nice pick & choose of words ..
Thank you Arvind :)
Did u watch TR films b4 writing this….sama rhyming’a irukku…..
Hahaha … No never !!!
The rhyming all came in a good timing ;)
hey its reli nice :)
Good one yaar….
Hope u write one more…… title being “Here she comes again” or “Here comes another angel for me” and give a happy ending.
It feels sad wit sad ending. N specially i can feel the pain too… :)
Aww … Hope I get to write .. atleast for you :) :)
I have never wrote anything with sad endings…. this is the first one … :)
hey simply superb..
She was not a passing cloud
but now it’s clear very loud..
i loved these lines whr u hv expressed te depth of ur feelings 4 her..
P.S. i really dint mean tat u is “U” :P
Thank you Sharadha :)
Your PS is making me Laugh :P hahahaha
hahaha..i’m happy 4 tat…yay atlast i can make u 2 smile atleast 4 a few seconds!ACHIEVEMENT :P
hmm .. you did :) :) *Cheers*
Itz not over dude… it will be a beginning, if any girl read this….! ur simply amazing:) #Love it, Like it# May god bless you with all you wanted:)
End comes with a new beginning … that is all I wanted to write ….
Thank you Akula :)
Dubuku. Enna feeling?
No feelings.. just a poem i wanted to write :) :)
Realy awesome,,,, i dont know abt ur profession, bt m sure,,,, dat u r a writter,,,, only a writter hv such kind of words (meaning full), f u r not a writter let me tell u something abt ur future,,, join it,,, u vl make ur place very well
Awww thanks for those words :) :)
Thank you so much … Let me see for that future . I ll try !!!
Aww. Good one! Specially tht Night stand;)
LOL ;)